Friday, September 15, 2006


I can post this without fear of becoming a poetry blogger* as i have only written one poem.

You came to me, I said you could
You said the things I knew you would
Extracting aims and dreams from me
And hoping you could treat my freedom
Like a toy to tangle with
Aren't hands enough to strangle with?
You blew me out, you shut me in
If you dropped dead, I'd hear the pin

*Not that there's anything wrong with poetry bloggers, just that I ain't a poet.


Blogger greengurll said...

really good poem, keep it up.

6:02 PM  

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